Darkness evaporated into dim light,
Silence gave way to musical chirps,
The cold, damp wind created a vapoury surrounding,
The sky changed from black to ashened blue,
Slowly the first scarlet streaks became visible.
I gazed at the changing hues of the eastern sky
In ethereal amazement.
The dazzling light seeped through the cloudy mazes,
Showered like rain : crimson, orange, golden.
I closed my eyes;
As the heavenly light poured in me,
And touched the rusty chords of space and time,
For once, it became real!
I sensed it through the dew drops, the soft leaves, cuckoo’s notes
The wet air, the cool breeze, the dirt at my feet :
Mother’s caring fingers and loving lips,
Taking away all my pains :
For once, I felt, free.
:) me too, gud goin ceo!
ReplyDeletejei patience r energy niye eita likhechhis, seita maintain korte parle you'll be famous one day!
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khub bhalo hoyechhe. thanx for proving that my choice of a blog-partner was correct.
keep going...
we'll rock.
Bah blog'ta besh toh! So Pou, finally welcome to blogosphere! Ami toh kobei bolechhilam blog korte, etodin'e shu-budhdhi hoyechhey dekhey darun lagchhey :)
ReplyDeleteBy the way, ami Rushie :)
While I was reading your poem, "The dazzling light seeped through the cloudy mazes, /Showered like rain : crimson, orange, golden." I am very disheartened seeing you don't own any blog.
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Phenomenal woman and you, it seems a new 'Jugalbandi' is going to perform. And they will rock!
:)